Hi Shyla, Its Haley From Papakura Central School (PCS), I Liked The Beautiful Colours You Have Used But, You Could Add A Learning Story Because Everyone That Looks At This Might Have No Idea What You Are Doing. Kind Regards, Haley
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Hi Shyla,
ReplyDeleteIts Haley From Papakura Central School (PCS),
I Liked The Beautiful Colours You Have Used But,
You Could Add A Learning Story Because Everyone That Looks At This Might Have No Idea What You Are Doing.
Kind Regards,
Haley