Hi Shyla, thanks for sharing your learning about conservation on your blog. Remember to include a couple of sentences with each blog post that explains to your readers what you have been learning about. I think it's a great idea to stop using plastic bags at the supermarket, but have you noticed that the fruit and vege area still has them?
Hello Shyla, I Like your Conservation Circle. Its Background is Very Pretty Next time you should add more writing and more things you do. Do you do anything else?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Shyla, thanks for sharing your learning about conservation on your blog. Remember to include a couple of sentences with each blog post that explains to your readers what you have been learning about. I think it's a great idea to stop using plastic bags at the supermarket, but have you noticed that the fruit and vege area still has them?
ReplyDeletehi Mrs g thank you for giving me feedback next time I will include a couple of sentences
DeleteHello Shyla,
ReplyDeleteI Like your Conservation Circle.
Its Background is Very Pretty
Next time you should add more writing and more things you do.
Do you do anything else?
From Jessica
hi Jessica thank you for giving me a comment next time I will write more and yes I do more stuff
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